Skip to content

Whispers in the Wind

June 10, 2013

the lashing of tempest seas
mortals scarcely imagine
under sundrenched skies
natures distant turbulence
strewn across stony headlands

hours passed round the windswept lighthouse
watching memories roll over and drown
til final farewells returned shore

waves never escape the sea
neither death nor desolation
seize my last breath drawn in bitter surf
stars light a path trekked many times
it’s not weariness or loneliness
madness or even my own wits
dares bid my name surrender

whispers in the wind
speak of life yet to come
I simply turn to listen

 

Β©2013 Gentry Avenue Productions. All Rights Reserved.

Advertisements
18 Comments leave one →
  1. June 10, 2013 6:18 pm

    I love it, George
    You once again earned a piece of dark chocolate. πŸ™‚

  2. June 10, 2013 9:10 pm

    Beauty whispering through each line, George! Love it!

  3. June 11, 2013 12:26 am

    So much said in your lines and as much lingering between them, too… Beautiful.

  4. July 3, 2013 6:22 am

    beautiful poem, George.. I love these lines :

    hours passed round the windswept lighthouse
    watching memories roll over and drown
    til final farewells returned shore………..

    groetjes, Francina

  5. July 3, 2013 7:43 pm

    I was reading a post just yesterday about an author (William Golding) who described the sea, and drowning in it, as hell. This reminded me of that, but in a good way πŸ˜‰

    • July 6, 2013 12:15 am

      Interesting resemblance, Alarna…I like the idea! Glad it resonated in a good way, too! πŸ™‚

  6. July 28, 2013 9:42 am

    Thank you for liking my post about creativity. Your poetry is wonderful, feels familiar… and is quite appropriate for my state of heart right now; I love the last stanza. Great to meet you. I’ll be reading quite a bit more of your work!

    • July 30, 2013 11:08 pm

      My pleasure! And thank you for dropping by here. No matter what the circumstances, I always believe the best is yet to come. Looking forward to reading your blog, too!

  7. August 8, 2013 11:32 am

    I guess I already “liked” & commented on this poem, it’s amazing! Thanks for the “likes” from you, I am honored. You’re awesome.

    • August 8, 2013 10:35 pm

      My pleasure! I am honored to share this with you and at the same time I have enjoyed reading your work. Lots more to see, I know…time is a premium but I’m certainly impressed so far! Thanks again!

  8. Brendan permalink
    November 19, 2013 5:36 am

    Yes, all we can do is “simply listen” — what else, with such magnitude tolling offshore? Wonderful.

    • November 19, 2013 2:58 pm

      Thanks, Brendan! Indeed, that magnitude can both overpower and empower. Glad you stopped by.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: