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Crescent Moon

January 14, 2013

our mourning doves flew with love on the wing
far out of sight where only hearts ever see
the newborn sun illumine eyes magnificent
still I listened even after winds fell silent
your crescent moon dancing the dawn of a dream
mine a song of winter borne out of spring

 

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14 Comments leave one →
  1. January 14, 2013 3:46 pm

    Beautiful George

  2. January 15, 2013 12:58 am

    very warm and tender poem! well done

  3. January 15, 2013 7:11 am

    This is so beautiful, George!….a dark piece of chocolate for you! 🙂

  4. January 15, 2013 9:27 am

    Such beauty in your words, George! Have a great day! 🙂

  5. January 29, 2013 1:26 am

    beautiful , George!
    *your crescent moon dancing the dawn of a dream
    mine a song of winter borne out of spring*

    I love these lines!
    groetjes, Francina

    • February 1, 2013 9:34 pm

      Thanks, Francina!
      The metric and rhyme both lead to the center but that vortex is only the key to unlocking these last lines (along with the visual crescent). The interplay between them dances again and again for me.

      Delighted that you liked it!
      Cheers, George

  6. Blood-Ink-Diary permalink
    January 29, 2013 7:56 pm

    Gorgeous poem! Simply engaging. You may want to check out a poem on Moon as guest writer has beautifully penned…called “They say” – it’s on my blog!
    Love as always to you. Cheers.

    • February 1, 2013 9:37 pm

      Thanks, Shaheen! I’ll definitely check out the guest post, sounds rather interesting. Hope all is well! Cheers!

  7. July 28, 2013 9:58 am

    Beautiful poetry, beautiful soul… On a more mundane note, I’m glad to see you know what mourning doves are, and how to spell their beautiful name. I love them here in Florida and yes, one does hear them in the morning.

    • July 30, 2013 11:09 pm

      Thanks! Florida is one of my favorite places. I’m partial, of course, since I was born there!

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